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PostSubject: Poetry   Sat Apr 07, 2007 12:31 am

This is where you can show us your poetry skills, please be orginal and post as many poems as you like,we'll be checking for originality, rhyme,context etc.

At the end of the week, we will choose the best poem and feature it on the sites home page.

So make sure it is yours.

Do enjoy it.

Our first Featured Poem will be on 15th April,2007.

Cast your poems as of now.

One thing to remember you have from Sunday To Friday to post your poems, cause it will be closed on Friday evening at 6pm for judging by the Guyanesezone Team. Then reopened on Sunday for the same process.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Sat Apr 07, 2007 12:35 pm

To my love(N.Persaud)

I love you because your you
I love you bacause you touch my life in everything that you do
I love you because you make me feel beautiful and
show me how special I am to you
I love you bacause you've changed my life in ways I never though possible
I love you because you've showed me all the things in life I never knew existed
I love you because you give without a reason and you care without expectation
I love you and if I were to say what you mean to me I won't know where to start
because you are seldom out of my thoughts and never out of my heat
You are the Joy in my life and thats why I love you.
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PostSubject: Angel friends   Sun Apr 08, 2007 2:15 pm

Angel friends
They say they are angels
Sent in form of friends,
To give the help that’s wanted
When your mishaps needs amends.

You are my dearest one
Are that angel sent to me,
For without my friend
I don’t know where I’d be.

You gave me a comfort
When I was sad and amiss,
So to you my angel friend
I give a heavenly kiss
Muaaaaaaaaaaaah!!

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Sun Apr 08, 2007 2:52 pm

Nice written girls.
But I cannot post mine. My poems are publishing soon.
After the publishing process I'll post mine.

Keep on writing and posting. Its a great talent that every mankind has.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Tue Apr 10, 2007 10:38 pm

To my Love(N.Persaud)

Stay with me now and forever,
until the end of time.
Love me today and tomorrow
Give your love to me as mine.
Share with me your ups and down
Make your life complete with mine.
I'll love you forever and always
I'll be with you until the end
I'll be your lover and companion
And always I'll be your FRIEND.
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PostSubject: With you   Fri Apr 13, 2007 3:43 pm

Thinking of you is i like thinking of paradise
Peaceful as a rose, who would want to stop thinking of paradise
Smelling you is like smelling the sweetess perfume ever made
Being with you is like being with the other me but more beautiful
Watching you is like watching the sunset on a peaceful day
There is something about you that makes mad when you cry
There is something about you that makes me smile when you smile

I have never met anyone like you,
You are the most special person in my world
You are a angel without wings,
Can't explain but every time i hear you voice my heart sings
I think about you so much
I just wanna feel you touch
I guess i trying to say i love you
Would you love me too.


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PostSubject: 1st winner...   Tue Apr 17, 2007 10:25 pm

- We already have one winner which is Areefa, you also need to note, once we found a winner and we announce it, we are not going back to the poems of the past, we are only going to be dealing with the present ones.-

So with that being said, congradulations to Areefa.

So let us continue folks.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Wed Apr 25, 2007 4:51 pm

THIS IS ME!
Broken and shattered Bruised and battered Lost and lonely This is Me * Dark and depressed Jittery and stressed Tired and empty This is Me * Cold and unfeeling Shaking and reeling Bleak and dreary This is Me * Remorse and doubt Drained and burned out Joyless and unhappy This is Me


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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Wed Apr 25, 2007 6:00 pm

Annie umm thats a reallie nice poem...im positive everyone here in GZ agrees with me and everyone else who stumbled across it on

http://www.philgomes.com/sisters.html and any other websites too...

i kno im not the admin but the rule is (which is at the very first post) u have to have an original poem, meanin one that u wrote and not someone else's
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PostSubject: Copyrighting   Wed Apr 25, 2007 7:26 pm

People please don’t forget that this is the original poetry and competition area, so if your posting in this thread please let your poems be created by you and not some pirate off of someone else hard work.

So once again no cheating, kindly adhere to the open posting at the top of the thread before posting your poems in it.

So babylove_annie kindly not make the same mistake twice.

Thanks for the early look out Mizzstarlight.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Wed Apr 25, 2007 9:45 pm

this is the thing i dunt get abt ppl...they do their thing..make a mistake..wudnt even accept it..wen they get caught..they cover their tracks
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Thu Apr 26, 2007 1:14 pm

Interesting poem Annie!

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Thu Apr 26, 2007 7:52 pm

Due To Pirating And Blatant Disrespect To The Members Of This Site Babylove_Annie Writings Will Not Be Apart Of The List Of Prospective Winners. “I was naive, but I certainly was not duplicitous.” Ann Landers

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Thu Apr 26, 2007 11:14 pm

[b] Our Love

I always think of you in blissful ways,
thinking how happy we be when you hold me.
I remember the first day you looked at me & smiled
and you didn't even hesisated to come and say Hi.
I remember the first time you touched me, remembering that tenderness in your touch.
I remember the first time you kissed me, that day i felt I could have flied.
I remember the first time u whispered those three words to me, I knew that was what I wanted to hear for the rest of my life.
Knowing that you care gives me comfort, knowing that your here gives me faith and know that you love me gives me hope.
Promise me that you'll never leave and I'll promise to love you now, always and forever

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PostSubject: Winner of Poetry Competition.   Mon Apr 30, 2007 9:13 am

We have another winner which is Areefa, so congratulation as we move into the new week.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Mon Apr 30, 2007 2:15 pm

Congratz hun!!!

Eat, sleep and drink rum!!!

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Mon Apr 30, 2007 2:39 pm

congratz Areefa....

i guess is only ppl who r in luv got talent to write such nice stuff
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Mon Apr 30, 2007 11:00 pm

tnx guys <hugs> I love you

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PostSubject: Goodbye   Sat May 05, 2007 12:49 am

Goodbye


You said you love you love me yet you made me cry
When you left i wished i had die
Each and every day i ask the question why
I love you so much and it no lie

I can't stand the hurt and the pain
But for you i am willing to do it again and again
Tell me you love me so i can fly
But even those words hurt I don't know why

Now it over and i still love you
Thinking of all the things we use to do
And of the part i found out it was all a lie
Now i am here wishing i had never said goodbye Crying or Very sad
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Sun May 06, 2007 6:32 pm

this poem has beennn a lonnnnnnnn time coming and at first i wasn't sure i should post it or leave it amongst te rest of my badly written poem wannabes lol. plz naw laugh lol

It sometimes seems like a dream
But I know it's very real
Happiness like this is something
I thought I'd never feel

I'm drawn to you like a bee to sweet nectar
Daily my soul longs to be where you are
Can I be the flower you land on & drink from?
A river of enchantment flows from my heart
You're gorgeous, alluring, with open arms so inviting
When you whisper I sigh & grow weak
I'll never forget the taste of crème de la crème
Cause your amoroso lips are award winning sweets

If I were an angel I'd take flight way up high
To watch over you where ever you go
My wings they would shelter & uphold you
My presence would bless & encourage you
My joy & peace would excite & comfort you
From this cruel, cold world I'd protect you

But yes, miracles do need wings to fly
And you're too far to even know why
These butterflies are hushed & harbored inside
So, that's why I write this poem

Your eyes are engaging
Your kiss so amazing
Your touch tantalizing
My temperatures rising
Need I say more of your all-powerful charms

Your passions mind blowing
Your countenance exploding
You've got me fantasizing
Mi amor I'm not lying
I'm mesmerized, babe hold me in your arms
Because baby I desire to be where you are

I love you Embarassed dedicated to the one i love with all my heart and soul.

OH YEAH... i think i forgot to say it was a little long lol lol!
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PostSubject: Winner   Sun May 06, 2007 7:02 pm

The Winner Of This Week Poetry Competition Is Rovin Gordon, Do Hope You Enjoy Your Week.

As From Angel Gurl's Poem The New Week Competition Shall Begin.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Tue May 08, 2007 8:52 am

awww congratz Rovin Gordon.

Hey, Candy that poem is just lovely, I like it. Keep on writing!

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Tue May 08, 2007 12:22 pm

Congratzzz Rovin, Keep it up

Nice Poem Candy Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Wed May 09, 2007 1:17 am

Thanks you guys
Smile


Love then friendship then enemy


I showed you my love and you betrayed me
I said I love you and you said the same
Now i know it was all a game
How could do that to me knowing I easily pain

To avoid the hurt i let you go
You said you felt like there is no tomorow
you sent me a message saying i still love you
But am i to believe all this is true

So i didn't reply to the message
And you start to behave like less than your age
When you sent me a curse on that message page
You were my love my friend, but now it as all end
Never call me again that is until you are of your right age.


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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Wed May 09, 2007 2:03 pm

aww....Sad

I felt it...

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