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Babylove_Annie
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PostSubject: Another one   Wed Apr 04, 2007 11:41 pm

It was a dark night and I was sitting all alone,
It was scary and the pain was on.

I asked for help I cried for relief,
But expecting this was my false belief.

Me was all alone with my misery,
Other was just making fun by doing mimicry.

I thought to find my own way to light,
But I never knew which way was right.

I kept on moving until I found a point,
But that point was a **** disappoint.

I got hurt and I fell in between.
After some time it just became a routine.

Still in hope of finding the right place,
People made me believe that it was my bad phase.

There was no one to hold me, no one to console me,
I was still fighting with not even whole of me.

I went right I went left,
I searched it all till nothing was left.

Nothing was fine all was going wrong,
I found them against me whom I thought was my own.

There was no up it was all down,
I knew how to swim but still I drowned.

People did came for rescue, they came for help,
But there help was just more for themselves.

Me was fainting but the hope was still alive,
At the end of the road I saw a bleak source of light.

It brightened my hope, relinquished my lost spirit,
But it was just a blank chit with nothing written on it.

I understood what the meaning was,
I came to know who in real my friend was.


I felt sad as no one was there,
But I was happy as nothing false was there.

It taught me a lesson; it gave me a way,
Everyone is with u when you are on the right way.

I still felt something was wrong,
Against false friends it was better to be alone.

Giving a new face to my life,
I thought to keep smiling all the while.

And I made a promise to my life,
That never to trust anyone in your life.
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PostSubject: Re: Another one   Thu Apr 05, 2007 9:33 pm

trust no man....

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PostSubject: Re: Another one   Fri Apr 06, 2007 12:30 pm

D@M Rite !!
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PostSubject: Re: Another one   Tue Apr 17, 2007 1:32 am

u have sum very intersting poem here babylove annie!
its really deep
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PostSubject: Re: Another one   Tue Apr 17, 2007 1:53 pm

Are you crying there Alladin?

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PostSubject: Re: Another one   Mon Apr 23, 2007 10:02 am

Alladin ur very emotional bro Very Happy afro
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PostSubject: Re: Another one   Mon Apr 23, 2007 4:05 pm

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww hes crying again...omg
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PostSubject: Re: Another one   Mon Apr 23, 2007 4:48 pm

I wonder if ur house is flood Alladin with tears?

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PostSubject: Re: Another one   Mon Apr 23, 2007 10:17 pm

aww sweet

LOL bEV
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PostSubject: Re: Another one   Sat Jul 21, 2007 12:49 pm

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