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-andy- Spurwing
Number of posts : 895 Age : 32 Location : Guyana Registration date : 2007-04-14
| Subject: Re: Poetry Sat Jun 30, 2007 7:53 am | |
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Administrator Webmaster
Number of posts : 180 Age : 37 Location : Guyana,Linden. Registration date : 2007-03-02
| Subject: Re: Poetry Sun Jul 01, 2007 2:59 am | |
| The winner of this weeks poetry is Angel Gurl with summer time loving.
Enjoy...
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mizzstarlight Red-Billed Toucan
Number of posts : 2837 Age : 33 Registration date : 2007-03-11
| Subject: Re: Poetry Sun Jul 01, 2007 2:09 pm | |
| candyyyy babyyyy congrattz itsss soooo sweeeetttt... | |
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angel_gurl Macaw
Number of posts : 1297 Age : 38 Registration date : 2007-03-24
| Subject: Re: Poetry Sun Jul 01, 2007 2:46 pm | |
| awwwww u guys thanks man now i blushing lolzz i will enjoy mi stay lol | |
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angel_gurl Macaw
Number of posts : 1297 Age : 38 Registration date : 2007-03-24
| Subject: Re: Poetry Sun Jul 01, 2007 3:19 pm | |
| welll let mi say thanks
wit wt else but a poem lolzzzzzzzzzz duhhh lol
You know me none We've chat some
You've listen to my crazy Story's... And probably thought I'm Was Dumb
Thank You for listening And showing kindness I just wonder will You be there from now On.......... | |
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angel_gurl Macaw
Number of posts : 1297 Age : 38 Registration date : 2007-03-24
| Subject: Re: Poetry Sun Jul 01, 2007 3:49 pm | |
| Crazy love
Pinch me so I will awake Out of this perfect dream Take me back to reality Is this some kind of scheme
For a love like yours doesn't tend to happen At least not to people like me Love like this only happens to the best Man oh man how can this be?
You've captured my love in one attempt To steal someone's heart should be considered a crime For it is a true treasure that I possess You should be locked up because you've stolen mine
Everyday my love grows stronger I know that time will surely reveal You've gotten my heart in the palm of your hand Man oh man what a steal! | |
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angel_gurl Macaw
Number of posts : 1297 Age : 38 Registration date : 2007-03-24
| Subject: Re: Poetry Sun Jul 01, 2007 3:56 pm | |
| lol aite here i am readin thru my old poem book lookin for a poem t post and i read this lolzz god wasn't i crazy wen i wrote this man ohhh man.
Taste of love.
Oh! to be a cauliflower beside a Brussel Sprout deep within my cauli heart I'd positively shout
I'd be happy in a casserole consomme or stew oh! my little Brussel Sprout if there I was with you
I'd pass up all the carrots the peas hold no attraction from my little Brussel Sprout I'd get my satisfaction
I'd swim on through the gravy with hope arising still oh! my little Brussel Sprout love, must have it's fill
Searching for my long lost love I'd inch across the plate oh! my little Brussel Sprout I fear it is too late
With knife and fork descending the end is very near oh! my little Brussel Sprout do not shed a tear
With cries of help ascending as I slithered down his throat oh! my little Brussel Sprout I hope the blighter chokes !!
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Beverly89 Moderator
Number of posts : 4437 Age : 34 Registration date : 2007-03-21
| Subject: Re: Poetry Sun Jul 01, 2007 9:44 pm | |
| congratz hun..and you're writin more..wowww!!! lolz.. | |
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angel_gurl Macaw
Number of posts : 1297 Age : 38 Registration date : 2007-03-24
| Subject: Re: Poetry Sun Jul 01, 2007 9:46 pm | |
| lol naww these old girl lol i ease up writtin lol. this was from back in the day lol | |
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Beverly89 Moderator
Number of posts : 4437 Age : 34 Registration date : 2007-03-21
| Subject: Re: Poetry Sun Jul 01, 2007 10:00 pm | |
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Flame_Angel Humming Bird
Number of posts : 727 Age : 36 Location : Bronx, New York Registration date : 2007-06-16
| Subject: Re: Poetry Tue Jul 03, 2007 11:00 am | |
| - angel_gurl wrote:
- lol yeah i kno alot huh? well this is the last one fa the day lol. lol yeah a lot of love poems huh? lol welll i guess is cus mi in love so sorry guys bear wit me. tomorrow i ga post mi ole break up ones lol. Hey it's summmer so if u aint find ur love yet go huntin its the time of love and fun.
Summer time lovin
Whispering thru the trees, Night summer breezes, Warm caressing, Where branches shadowed, I hear a nightingales song How magnificent this night, With a sprinkle of stars, An excitement it does inspire Wooed by a mystic moon, A spell has then been cast, Romantic illusions of love I did fantasize, Suddenly a flash of lightning, Thunder did roar, Left was only the darkness, The moon was gone, The stars scattered away, My romantic illusions were no more when from A prelude of a fantasy, There had blossemed a reality You having appeared at last. I read this on the front page and I just wanna say I like it, you gotz skillz!!! - angel_gurl wrote:
- lol aite here i am readin thru my old poem book lookin for a poem t post and i read this lolzz god wasn't i crazy wen i wrote this man ohhh man.
Taste of love.
Oh! to be a cauliflower beside a Brussel Sprout deep within my cauli heart I'd positively shout
I'd be happy in a casserole consomme or stew oh! my little Brussel Sprout if there I was with you
I'd pass up all the carrots the peas hold no attraction from my little Brussel Sprout I'd get my satisfaction
I'd swim on through the gravy with hope arising still oh! my little Brussel Sprout love, must have it's fill
Searching for my long lost love I'd inch across the plate oh! my little Brussel Sprout I fear it is too late
With knife and fork descending the end is very near oh! my little Brussel Sprout do not shed a tear
With cries of help ascending as I slithered down his throat oh! my little Brussel Sprout I hope the blighter chokes !!
lol ROFL cute. | |
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Administrator Webmaster
Number of posts : 180 Age : 37 Location : Guyana,Linden. Registration date : 2007-03-02
| Subject: Re: Poetry Sun Jul 08, 2007 1:12 am | |
| This week poetry competition winner is Angel_gurl with Crazy love. | |
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Beverly89 Moderator
Number of posts : 4437 Age : 34 Registration date : 2007-03-21
| Subject: Re: Poetry Sun Jul 08, 2007 1:37 pm | |
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angel_gurl Macaw
Number of posts : 1297 Age : 38 Registration date : 2007-03-24
| Subject: Re: Poetry Sun Jul 08, 2007 3:07 pm | |
| haha gain?? wow thanks guys:) thanks bev | |
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Beverly89 Moderator
Number of posts : 4437 Age : 34 Registration date : 2007-03-21
| Subject: Re: Poetry Sun Jul 08, 2007 4:46 pm | |
| you're a talented poet. You're welcome. | |
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-andy- Spurwing
Number of posts : 895 Age : 32 Location : Guyana Registration date : 2007-04-14
| Subject: Re: Poetry Mon Jul 09, 2007 9:53 am | |
| awww loook at de love ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ | |
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Beverly89 Moderator
Number of posts : 4437 Age : 34 Registration date : 2007-03-21
| Subject: Re: Poetry Mon Jul 09, 2007 2:22 pm | |
| awww Andy....lolzzz....
Andy write a poem and post am in here naa... | |
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AnGeL_EyeSz07 Screecher Parrot
Number of posts : 2463 Age : 35 Location : oRLANDo FLoRIDA Registration date : 2007-06-17
| Subject: Re: Poetry Mon Jul 09, 2007 6:14 pm | |
| - Beverly89 wrote:
- awww Andy....lolzzz....
Andy write a poem and post am in here naa... I know. Let's see what u got. | |
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Flame_Angel Humming Bird
Number of posts : 727 Age : 36 Location : Bronx, New York Registration date : 2007-06-16
| Subject: Re: Poetry Sat Jul 14, 2007 7:43 pm | |
| look at that... here I am congratulating you and the poems aren't really yours. - angel_gurl wrote:
- lol aite here i am readin thru my old poem book lookin for a poem t post and i read this lolzz god wasn't i crazy wen i wrote this man ohhh man.
Taste of love.
Oh! to be a cauliflower beside a Brussel Sprout deep within my cauli heart I'd positively shout
I'd be happy in a casserole consomme or stew oh! my little Brussel Sprout if there I was with you
I'd pass up all the carrots the peas hold no attraction from my little Brussel Sprout I'd get my satisfaction
I'd swim on through the gravy with hope arising still oh! my little Brussel Sprout love, must have it's fill
Searching for my long lost love I'd inch across the plate oh! my little Brussel Sprout I fear it is too late
With knife and fork descending the end is very near oh! my little Brussel Sprout do not shed a tear
With cries of help ascending as I slithered down his throat oh! my little Brussel Sprout I hope the blighter chokes !!
lol http://www.funnypoets.com/poems/fatescruelblow.htm - angel_gurl wrote:
- this poem has beennn a lonnnnnnnn time coming and at first i wasn't sure i should post it or leave it amongst te rest of my badly written poem wannabes lol. plz naw laugh lol
It sometimes seems like a dream But I know it's very real Happiness like this is something I thought I'd never feel
I'm drawn to you like a bee to sweet nectar Daily my soul longs to be where you are Can I be the flower you land on & drink from? A river of enchantment flows from my heart You're gorgeous, alluring, with open arms so inviting When you whisper I sigh & grow weak I'll never forget the taste of crème de la crème Cause your amoroso lips are award winning sweets
If I were an angel I'd take flight way up high To watch over you where ever you go My wings they would shelter & uphold you My presence would bless & encourage you My joy & peace would excite & comfort you From this cruel, cold world I'd protect you
But yes, miracles do need wings to fly And you're too far to even know why These butterflies are hushed & harbored inside So, that's why I write this poem
Your eyes are engaging Your kiss so amazing Your touch tantalizing My temperatures rising Need I say more of your all-powerful charms
Your passions mind blowing Your countenance exploding You've got me fantasizing Mi amor I'm not lying I'm mesmerized, babe hold me in your arms Because baby I desire to be where you are
dedicated to the one i love with all my heart and soul.
OH YEAH... i think i forgot to say it was a little long lol http://www.poetspassion.com/mypoem.htm?C=26034 - angel_gurl wrote:
- True love
Only once in your life, I truly believe, you find someone who can completely turn your world around.
You tell them things that you've never shared with another soul and they absorb everything you say and actually want to hear more.
You share hopes for the future, dreams that will never come true, goals that were never achieved and the many disappointments life has thrown at you.
When something wonderful happens, you can't wait to tell them about it, knowing they will share in your excitement.
They are not embarrassed to cry with you when you are hurting or laugh with you when you make a fool of yourself.
Never do they hurt your feelings or make you feel like you are not good enough, but rather they build you up and show you the things about yourself that make you special and even beautiful.
There is never any pressure, jealousy or competition but only a quiet calmness when they are around.
You can be yourself and not worry about what they will think of you because they love you for who you are.
The things that seem insignificant to most people such as a note, song or walk become invaluable treasures kept safe in your heart to cherish forever.
Memories of your childhood come back and are so clear and vivid it's like being young again. Colors seem brighter and more brilliant.
Laughter seems part of daily life where before it was infrequent or didn't exist at all.
A phone call or two during the day helps to get you through a long day's work and always brings a smile to your face.
In their presence, there's no need for continuous conversation, but you find you're quite content in just having them nearby.
Things that never interested you before become fascinating because you know they are important to this person who is so special to you.
You think of this person on every occasion and in everything you do. Simple things bring them to mind like a pale blue sky, gentle wind or even a storm cloud on the horizon.
You open your heart knowing that there's a chance it may be broken one day and in opening your heart, you experience a love and joy that you never dreamed possible.
You find that being vulnerable is the only way to allow your heart to feel true pleasure that's so real it scares you.
You find strength in knowing you have a true friend and possibly a soul mate who will remain loyal to the end.
Life seems completely different, exciting and worthwhile. Your only hope and security is in knowing that they are a part of your life. http://lizzie011.tripod.com/ - angel_gurl wrote:
- lolthe one above ^^^^^^^ i had to scan it in it wudda take me tooooooooo long to type over lol sorry ohhh yeah its ole tooo and dedicated to somebody special special lol
A bond so strong, I cannot, let go.
A passionate desire, thats deep within my heart.
Satin sheets, deep colors of, purple and red rose petals a flow everywhere.
What do this lead to from the heart.
My mind is telling me no, but my heart is telling me yes.
Yes baby I love you.
I wanna be the woman, to always, make you happy.
A bond so strong, I cannot, let go.
A passionate desire, thats deep within my heart.
A bond so strong! A bond so strong!! A bond so strong!!!
On our wedding day sweetie, we became one.
On our honeymoon nite, we shared each others loving bless.
And within the depths of nite we became soul mates.
A bond so strong, I cannot, let go. You say no baby, correction!
A bond so strong, we cannot, let go and never will.
ammelia u see the bold part?? lolzzz no comment lol http://www.cherrytap.com/blog/26969/387348 - angel_gurl wrote:
- lol yeah i kno alot huh? well this is the last one fa the day lol. lol yeah a lot of love poems huh? lol welll i guess is cus mi in love so sorry guys bear wit me. tomorrow i ga post mi ole break up ones lol. Hey it's summmer so if u aint find ur love yet go huntin its the time of love and fun.
Summer time lovin
Whispering thru the trees, Night summer breezes, Warm caressing, Where branches shadowed, I hear a nightingales song How magnificent this night, With a sprinkle of stars, An excitement it does inspire Wooed by a mystic moon, A spell has then been cast, Romantic illusions of love I did fantasize, Suddenly a flash of lightning, Thunder did roar, Left was only the darkness, The moon was gone, The stars scattered away, My romantic illusions were no more when from A prelude of a fantasy, There had blossemed a reality You having appeared at last. http://vietroom.com/dll/lsmainisapi.dll?load=page3&member=sweetazn604 (right click and select all on the page to see the words). - angel_gurl wrote:
- Crazy love
Pinch me so I will awake Out of this perfect dream Take me back to reality Is this some kind of scheme
For a love like yours doesn't tend to happen At least not to people like me Love like this only happens to the best Man oh man how can this be?
You've captured my love in one attempt To steal someone's heart should be considered a crime For it is a true treasure that I possess You should be locked up because you've stolen mine
Everyday my love grows stronger I know that time will surely reveal You've gotten my heart in the palm of your hand Man oh man what a steal! http://forums.pearljam.com/showthread.php?t=161312 Hun, before you plagiarize, remember it isn't smart to do it on the internet because it's easier for the truth to be found out. I'm not doing this to be mean, it's just that the first post explicitly says that you should enter ORIGINAL work. | |
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Administrator Webmaster
Number of posts : 180 Age : 37 Location : Guyana,Linden. Registration date : 2007-03-02
| Subject: Re: Poetry Sat Jul 14, 2007 11:57 pm | |
| It’s a shame you know, you give people a chance to show out what talents they have, but instead of doing that, they steal people’s creation and call it there owns, so for such an act of lying and plagiarism “ You will not be allowed to post any poems in here, cause they will not be taken into any consideration.”
Thank you very much Flame_ Angel, good looking out.
Peace Guyanesezone Team… | |
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angel_gurl Macaw
Number of posts : 1297 Age : 38 Registration date : 2007-03-24
| Subject: Re: Poetry Sun Jul 15, 2007 12:16 am | |
| Actually sweetheatryt mine can be found at lyc.com which is a poem site i submit poems to. Ohh and i have 3 user names on it so please check there okay???? and i stoped posting on that because ot wasnt copyrighted and your poems were easily stolen so i along witha few friends left.
but still Kudosssss for the look out and why does it seem that these ate from blogs where a lot of work are copies??? and did you go through all this troble to check diffrent sites to find them??? MY poems?????? if you want i can put up mt book i have fillled wiith them and you can see what else you find but thanks . | |
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angel_gurl Macaw
Number of posts : 1297 Age : 38 Registration date : 2007-03-24
| Subject: Re: Poetry Sun Jul 15, 2007 5:08 am | |
| Love Poem #260213
Sweetest pain by angel_eyez
Sometimes it seems like a dream But I know it's very real Happiness and a love like this is something I thought I'd never feel
I'm drawn to you like a bee to the sweet nectar of your kisses Daily I long to be where you are Can I be the wildflower you land on to feast from? A river of enchantment flows from my soul You're gorgeous, alluring, with open arms so inviting. amazing my darling are you When you whisper I sigh & grow weak with need. I'll never forget the taste of crème de la crème Cause your amoroso lips are award winning sweets, for ever tempting the child in me
If I were an angel I'd take flight way up high To watch over you where ever you go My wings they would shelter & uphold you My presence would bless & encourage you My joy & peace would excite & comfort you From this cruel, cold world I'd protect you. For you are my love, my sanctuary, my saviour.
But yes, miracles do need wings to fly And you're too far to even know why These butterflies are hiden inside, becoming my sweet torment my delicious torture. So, that's why I write this poem, to set free this longing i have with in
With eyes are engaging Kisses so amazing Your touch.... mmmmm so tantalizing My temperatures soars as my passion builds... Oh baby Need I say more ?
Your passions mind blowing Your countenance exploding You've got me fantasizing Mi amor I'm not lying I'm mesmerized, babe hold me in your arms Because baby I desire to be where you are Baby, I need to be where you are........ If I'm to easy this torture, cure this, my sweetest pain.
Notes From The Author: You may e-mail me with any comments about my poetry.
To my love. one day i will find him, my saviour....
http://library.lovingyou.com/poetry/260/260213.shtml
ohhh do ask what is my yahoo email address.... Its angel_eyez lol. | |
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angel_gurl Macaw
Number of posts : 1297 Age : 38 Registration date : 2007-03-24
| Subject: Re: Poetry Sun Jul 15, 2007 5:13 am | |
| ohhh thats the original version.... both versions can be found. on said site
the next version....
It sometimes seems like a dream, this love But I know it's very real Happiness like this is something I thought I'd never feel
I'm drawn to you like a bee to sweet nectar Daily my soul longs to be where you are Can I be the flower you land on & drink from? A river of enchantment flows from my heart You're gorgeous, alluring, with open arms so inviting When you whisper I sigh & grow weak I'll never forget the taste of crème de la crème Cause your amoroso lips are award winning sweets
If I were an angel I'd take flight way up high To watch over you where ever you go My wings they would shelter & uphold you My presence would bless & encourage you My joy & peace would excite & comfort you From this cruel, cold world I'd protect you
But yes, miracles do need wings to fly, ohh yes... And you're too far to even know why These butterflies are hushed & harbored inside So, that's why I write this poem
Your eyes are engaging Your kiss so amazing....... mmmm Your touch tantalizing My temperatures rising Need I say more of your all-powerful charms
Your passions mind blowing Your countenance exploding You've got me fantasizing Mi amor I'm not lying I'm mesmerized, babe hold me in your arms Because baby I desire to be where you are
Notes From The Author: You may e-mail me with any comments about my poetry.
lol too my baby my love my life. for Izzy http://library.lovingyou.com/poetry/260/260215.shtml | |
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angel_gurl Macaw
Number of posts : 1297 Age : 38 Registration date : 2007-03-24
| Subject: Re: Poetry Sun Jul 15, 2007 5:29 am | |
| well since i'm sure you researching skills are in tact darling you can look ofr the rest at the same site mind you. And this is a new one I assure you that you wont find this one anywhere else. Cold pursed lips, quickly unfurling into a cruel sneer, Foaming, as the posion slowly works its why through, writhing like serpents in its malevolent dance.... Reproducing, spread like a vicious plague.... Awaiting the final blow to end an innocent soul. Ohh how they mock and loath and criticize Malice and vengence gleaming in their eyes.. Teeth bared like fangs of a beast, As their souls live in tormoil that never cease. Ohh woe be unto the saints and saviours that come before this mighty foe. Whose ambition is to pick and shred any and every soul. Oh what a beast Jealousy can be..... Blighting the hearts of the innocents, Infecting the souls of the righteous....... But i ask how righteous are they to start?? Do they not carry seeds of spite and bitterness lodge like thorns in their hearts?? Seeds waiting to take root in the dark soils so rich with contempt.... Bringing forth Jealosy as its friut. Ohh woe be onto the staints and saviours who face this foe..... By Iz i need a title........ care to help?? | |
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mizzstarlight Red-Billed Toucan
Number of posts : 2837 Age : 33 Registration date : 2007-03-11
| Subject: Re: Poetry Sun Jul 15, 2007 11:30 am | |
| oh gosh candy tek it easy rassssssssssssssssssssss lol how about "jealousy" for the title of ur poem | |
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